Music magazine Double Page Spread - First Draft

This is my original image that will be my artists portait photo for the fist page of my DPS. This image is very good and effective because it matches the rock genre in how my artist scruffy and the style of the hair.

This is my second page with my interview for my DPS. It has the title in bold and the other image. However since this is my first draft there are some faults with this. To star,  the interview is scruffy as I'm trying to get it to organise with the arm (that is part of the image as it usually comes into the second image aswell). Also it is not organised, in terms of the text as there are multiple space inbetween and there is no pull qoute. All of this I will sort out and my next one will be my final piece which will look much better and presentable.